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The Marble Mystery…

Posted by: | October 9, 2011 | 5 Comments |

A long time ago the world blacked out and was suddenly spilt into three planets. Everything was ruined and destroyed . Eight- year old Tommy, was the only survivor on his planet. He searched for days and days for other survivors. He had no luck. The only thing he had left was a marble that his father gave to him on his fifth birthday. He always kept it in his left pocket. One day,  he found a orange metal box with engravings in it that said the number 10. When he picked it up, it lit up as bright as the sun and blinded Tommy’s eyes. He dropped the orange box and it fell to the ground. Suddenly, he noticed that his pocket had started to glow. His marble flew out of his pocket and landed in the box and the light faded.  Once it was safe, Tommy stood up and stared at the magical box.

To Be Continued…. Feel free to add on to my story in your comments

 

This post is for the student blogging challenge (challenge 4 activity 5)

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5 Comments

  1. By: Elise on November 3, 2011 at 9:46 am      

    Hi! My name is Elise and I’m from the USA. The story you made was brilliant! Come visit my blog at eliserocks.edublogs.org. Hey I think this story well end with Tommy finding more survivors. Please leave a comment. PPPLLLEEEAASSSEEE!!!

  2. By: alexandra110gs on November 15, 2011 at 3:28 pm      

    Hello Kaylee!

    I happen to hear you do competitive gymnastics! I also do gymnastics and I love competing!

    Please visit my blog – http://alexandra110gs.edublogs.org/
    ~Alexandra~

  3. By: Josee on November 17, 2011 at 9:28 am      

    Hello alexandra!

    I also do competitive gymnastics! what level are you in?

  4. By: Kaylee on November 18, 2011 at 12:51 pm      

    @Elise
    That is a good way to end my story. I have visited your blog too! Thanks,
    Kaylee

  5. By: Kaylee on November 18, 2011 at 12:54 pm      

    @Alexandra
    Wow we have a lot in common! I also love competing. What level of gymnastics are you? What is your favourite skill? I have visited your blog as well. Thanks:)

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